I was a pupil at Marshland School and this blog is where I shared my learning. This blog has been archived, no further content will be uploaded or added. You are welcome to continue viewing posts, however commenting has been disabled.
Wednesday, October 24, 2018
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positve it was really creative but why does it say false teeth twice
ReplyDeleteHi Henry. I liked your character because you added a lot of detail into it. This reminded me of when I did it on my last book. Next time maybe describe you writing a bit more like why is she gross and why is she boring.
ReplyDeleteFrom Lachie.